Braking up with
your first boyfriend because he is an untrustworthy, abusive,
cheating whore makes a girl really never want to talk to a guy again. But girls
will be girl’s hopeless romantics searching for true love like
in movies. Sadly I’m one of those girls I have had been single for two years
and no matter how many guys I talked to, how cute and flirty they were, it just
never felt right. I know I’m only 16 and I have the rest of my life to find
someone but mi. feeling so hopeless lately. It was around July and my sister
had invited me to go to Pennsylvania for her birthday, I spoke to My
father he agreed to pick me up two days ago of Corse he would do this and of
Corse I would be upset and disappointed and empty out my suit
case and just laid in bed waiting for my life to change before my eyes, he
called latter that night and said he’ll pick me up the 7th for
sure.
I decided to wait till last minute to pack, it was a long rainy
ride but I was just happy that I would be leaving it all behind that sad love
life I hopelessly longed for, I got there latter that night and fixed up the
room they had made for me in the attic it was quite nice with a nice king
size bed with fluffy pink pillows perfectly laid uniformly against the bed
and each other, I feel back wards on to the bed as my body slowly seem to form
against the bed , felt like i was laying on clouds and I felt safe as I wrapped
myself around the comfy blanket. I decided to text one of my closest friends
she was also at her dads that summer, I was telling her that this summer was
going to be my summer that I was going to have one of those summer romance
like in the movie grease she just laughed at my ridiculous desires and we
talked about foolishness for the rest of the night. I didn’t have much planed
for the following day but I was sure excited to not be stuck at home, I decide
to go with my brother to fix his car it was a hot day and the sun was hotter
than usual. I had dressed in my turquoise shorts and a flour crop top, with my
sandals and my hair in a nice big bun, I guessed I looked pretty good because I
had a lot of eyes on me that day, latter that night I decided to work in one of
my dad’s store and some tall tone caramel skin color guy with dark brown eyes
that had a little star like shine in them, with a 90s hair style walked in
with sweats and a duffle bag, he come behind the contour, in my head I was
asking myself who is this? He looked at me like I wasn’t really there
and started having a conversation with “my dad”, I was kind shocked
I mean I’m pretty sure I looked pretty that day and he didn’t even stare???
Someone came in the store and I was bagging up there stuff and when I looked to
my right there his was standing there like the most beautiful godlike creature
i ever laid eyes on and our eyes locked, at that moment something told me
I had to get to know this kid. The next day I’m I asked my brother
who this god was and that I thought he was cute. My brother made
fun of me, good thing I didn’t tell him how I really viewed him but by the look
on his face I knew he was up to no good. My brother told me about going
on a road trip to another town and that there was amazing view at a lake with
ducks swimming and little boats. I’m a huge sucker for nature and exploring, I
woke up at 7 that morning got ready and put my hair in a bun, I decided to take
my book with me the one I was suppose to be reading for AP English I figured
that the ride will be long and I would get some more reading done but nope as
soon as I got in the car there he was the beautiful caramel colored god that
wanted nothing to do with me. I tell you there’s nothing worse than liking
someone that doesn’t like you back but its even worse when you have to stick
your nose in a book because that person doesn’t even have a conversation with
you.
My
brother, my dear brother that is usually over protective left me alone
with this guy this stranger that had absolutely no interest in me. The surroundings
were absolutely breath taking I mean it was defiantly taken from a romance
movie. I was beginning to get a little frustrated I mean what isn’t
there to like? I’m smart, I read, I’m cute. He must be playing for
the other team he surely dressed like it with his burgundy shorts and toms and
tight striped shirt that showed of his tone healthy body. Sigh, I continue
reading. But as I kept reading my mind had made a decision to ignore godlike
man, but my brother was determined to do the opposite he invited him to the
movie with us that night and purposely made me sit next to him, I was bummed
but I really wanted to see this movie so I sucked it up, he kept talking and I
responded with just watch the movie and my hands were at my sides and I felt this
tension between us, before I knew it we were holding hands an as soon as my
flesh touched his I felt fireworks and a huge heat wave pass through me so I
just let go I swear I wanted a summer romance so bad my mind was making things
up but no , it wasn’t it was real , I mean all this kid did was held my
hand and I was going crazy, we went to eat after the movies it was 1 in the
morning and he took a picture of me on my phone so I noticed that I had
made him sent me a picture earlier since my brother didn’t want to give
me his number and he didn’t ask for mine I texted “ you think you’re low” and
the text messages started and before I knew it my summer romance
began , with my soul Mate.

5 comments:
Great story, although there are a few gramatical errors to be fixed. Great job though
-Melissa E.
Great story
Thank you guys
Jaritza this allows everyone to see hwo your writing can paint pictures. Even though there where grammatical errors as a previous comment said. I think this is a great piece of work and depicts a part of your life that you were willing to share with poeple.
I really enjoyed how you captured the intensity of her feelings for this guy. I would imagine it would feel just like that, single for two years and seeing this amazing guy - I would have felt the same way. I would advise however that you'd try to find other ways to describe him than "god-like". Hearing it repetitively takes away from the effect.
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